Re: Grammar nits (Re: [Fwd: I-D ACTION:draft-good-ldap-ldif-04.txt])

[Harald Tveit Alvestrand <Harald@Alvestrand.no>]

Here are the REAL grammar nits from verson 04:

- missing endquote for "control"
- extra space in front of repetition in second line of same definiton

New definition:


   control              = "control:" FILL ldap-oid            ; controlType
                          0*1(FILL ("true" / "false"))      ; criticality
                          0*1(value-spec)                    ; controlValue
                          SEP
                          ; (See note 10, below)


And the following used/defined nits:

DIGIT: Used 1 times, but not defined
base-64-dn: Used 1 times, but not defined
base-64-rdn: Used 1 times, but not defined
NUL: Defined but not used
base64-rdn: Defined but not used

I recommend basing the grammar on octets, and saying that you define
it like this.

                     Harald


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Harald Tveit Alvestrand, Maxware, Norway
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