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RE: draft-ietf-ldapbis-bcp64-01 comments



> -----Original Message-----
> From: owner-ietf-ldapbis@OpenLDAP.org
> [mailto:owner-ietf-ldapbis@OpenLDAP.org]On Behalf Of Kurt D. Zeilenga

> >Section 3.8 (Directory Systems Names) says:
> >
> >   The IANA-maintained "Directory Systems Names" registry 
> [IANADSN] of
> >   valid keywords for well known attributes used in the LDAPv2 string
> >   representation of a distinguished name [RFC1779], now Historic
> >   [RFC3494].
> >
> >Please insert a verb in this paragraph.  (Or is "used" the verb?  I
> >couldn't parse it that way.)
> 
> I'll s/used/was used/ 

Better would be to replace ", now Historic" with "is now Historic" ...
Grammatically speaking, anyway.

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