Re: minor comments on caching draft

[Tim Howes <howes@netscape.com>]

Mark Wahl wrote:

> Here are some early last call comments on the caching draft.  I believe them
> to be of a editorial nature.
>
> General:
>
> The document uses "MAY" but does not reference RFC 2119.

Added the necessary text + reference.


> Section 4:
>
> A minor but necessary change: do not have quotes around the SYNTAX OID.  These
> quotes were removed from the syntaxes in the core LDAPv3 specs several months
> ago when syntax names were changed to OIDs.
>
> Also, since it is stated this is an operational attribute, the definition
> should have USAGE directoryOperation.
>
> Thus these changes together would read:
>
>    ( 1.3.6.1.4.1.250.1.60 NAME 'ttl' EQUALITY integerMatch
>      SYNTAX 1.3.6.1.4.1.1466.115.121.1.27 SINGLE-VALUE
>      USAGE directoryOperation )

Fixed.


> Section 8:
>
> Update bibliography for [ldapv3-1] and [ldapv3-2]; these are now RFCs.

Fixed.


> RFC 1279 is the only non-standards-track document referenced.  You may wish to
> check that referencing an Experimental RFC will not prevent the document from
> proceeding on the standards track.

I don't think this should be a problem.

Thanks for the comments!         -- Tim