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Re: [Protocol] clarification on StartTLS resonse (WAS: authmeth-15notes)

At 03:33 PM 10/18/2005, Jim Sermersheim wrote:
>My proposed change to [Protocol] Section 4.14.2 is this:
><old>
>If the server is willing and able to negotiate TLS, it returns with the resultCode set to success. Refer to Section 4 of [AuthMeth] for details.
><new>
>If the server is willing and able to negotiate TLS, it returns with the resultCode set to success. At this point the protocol peers may commence with TLS negotiation. Refer to Section 4 of [AuthMeth] for details. 

I suggest replacing the last two sentences with:
        At this point, the protocol peers commence TLS
        negotiation as discussed in Section 3 of [AuthMeth].

It might also be appropriate to describe "this point" more
precisely, but my attempts in doing that were awkward at
best.  I do think "this point" is reasonable clear.

Kurt