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Section 3.2 (Protocol Mechanisms) refers to supportedFeatures in the
[Features] document. What is that? There is no [Features] in the
Section 3.6 (LDAP Result Codes) says:
LDAP result messages carry an resultCode enumerated value to indicate
the outcome of the operation [Protocol]. Each result code consists
of a keyword and a non-negative integer.
Which keywords are these? The ASN.1 names of result codes in
Typos in section 3.3 (Object Identifier Descriptors):
A values ending with a hyphen ("-") reserve all descriptors which
should be "A value ... reserves".
Section 3.7 (LDAP Authentication Method) ends with:
SASL is an extensible LDAP
I think you should strike "LDAP" here. SASL is general, it's not just
an LDAP thing.
Section 3.8 (Directory Systems Names) says:
The IANA-maintained "Directory Systems Names" registry [IANADSN] of
valid keywords for well known attributes used in the LDAPv2 string
representation of a distinguished name [RFC1779], now Historic
Please insert a verb in this paragraph. (Or is "used" the verb? I
couldn't parse it that way.)