RE: ldapbis WG Last Call on ldapbis-syntaxes, ldapbis-strprep

["Steven Legg" <steven.legg@adacel.com.au>]

> Some minor edits to draft-ietf-ldapbis-06.txt required:

That should be draft-ietf-ldapbis-syntaxes-06.txt (doh!).

Also, one more correction:

4) [ROADMAP] isn't provided in the references. It is

   [ROADMAP] Zeilenga, K., "LDAP: Technical Specification Road Map",
   draft-ietf-ldapbis-roadmap-xx.txt, a work in progress, March 2003.

Regards,
Steven

> 
> 1) The title of RFC 3383 is incorrect in the references,
> 
> 2) Section 5.2.16 omits the sentence (thanks to Hallvard for 
> picking it up),
> 
>    "The LDAP definition for the numericStringSubstringsMatch matching
>    rule is:"
> 
> 3) The telephoneNumberMatch and telephoneNumberSubstringsMatch need to
>    be added to the list in the first sentence of section 5.2. 
> The comment
>    on telephoneNumberMatch in Appendix B, case 25 needs to be 
> struck out.
> 
> Regards,
> Steven
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: owner-ietf-ldapbis@OpenLDAP.org
> > [mailto:owner-ietf-ldapbis@OpenLDAP.org]On Behalf Of RL 'Bob' Morgan
> > Sent: Wednesday, 11 June 2003 19:23
> > To: IETF ldapbis WG
> > Subject: ldapbis WG Last Call on ldapbis-syntaxes, ldapbis-strprep
> >
> >
> >
> > This message initiates a LDAPbis Working Group Last Call on the two
> > documents:
> >
> >                 LDAP: Syntaxes and Matching Rules
> >                 draft-ietf-ldapbis-syntaxes-06.txt
> >                           3 June 2003
> >
> > and
> >
> >             LDAP: Internationalized String Preparation
> >                 draft-ietf-ldapbis-strprep-00.txt
> >                           26 May 2003
> >
> > The purpose of this WG Last Call it to ensure that the
> > Working Group has
> > achieved consensus that these documents are suitable for
> > publication as
> > IETF Standards Track RFCs.
> >
> > Please review the documents for both technical and 
> editorial problems.
> > Technical issues should be discussed on this list.  Editorial
> > issues may
> > be sent to the document editors.
> >
> > The Last Call period will end on Wednesday, June 25, 2003.
> >
> > Upon completion of the Last Call, the WG chair(s) will take
> > action based
> > upon the consensus of the WG.  Possible actions include:
> >
> >   1) recommending to the IETF Application Area Directors that the
> >      documents, after possible editorial or other minor changes, be
> >      considered by the IESG for publication as Standards Track RFCs
> >      (which generally involves an IETF-wide Last Call); or
> >
> >   2) requiring that outstanding issues be adequately addressed prior
> >      to further action (including, possibly, another Last Call).
> >
> > Remember that it is our responsibility as Working Group members to
> > ensure the quality of our documents and of the Internet Standards
> > process.  So, please read and comment!
> >
> >  - RL "Bob" Morgan
> >    LDAPbis co-chair
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> 
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