Re: IETF ldapbis WG Last Call: draft-ietf-ldapbis-user-schema-05.txt

[Andrew Sciberras <andrew.sciberras@eB2Bcom.com>]

Hi,

I would just like to note that there are some issues with this draft 
that I am currently aware of.

* The X.500 reference should reference the X.500 recommendation instead 
of X.501-X.525
* The Example in 2.13 requires the text: "a the"  to be replaced with "the"
* The mis-spelt word "attributer" appears in the Security Consideration.
* The security considerations contains the following text:
in RFC 2377 by A. Grimstad, R. Huber, S, Sataluri and M. Smith.
Where "S," needs to be changed to "S."


Also, note that the current version that should be reviewed is -09 and 
that the last call period will end July 6.

Thanks,
Andrew Sciberras