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I agree withi this. This was added to 2251, but hasn't been needed since we added AuthMeth.
If no one disagrees, I'll remove it.
Jim
>>> "Kurt D. Zeilenga" <Kurt@OpenLDAP.org> 11/11/04 10:46:12 PM >>> Given our reference to [AuthMeth], I think it best to delete the whole paragraph containing this text. The paragraph is simply not needed anymore (in [Protocol]). Kurt At 03:51 PM 11/9/2004, Jim Sermersheim wrote: >ok, new text is: > >The process of authorization may, among other things, consider >authentication information obtained during the bind operation, and/or >other acts of authentication (such as lower layer security services). > >Jim > >>>> Hallvard B Furuseth < h.b.furuseth@usit.uio.no > 11/9/04 6:32:32 AM >>>> >Jim Sermersheim writes: >> Is this less or more confusing? >> The process of authorization may consider (among other things), >> authentication information obtained during the bind operation, >and/or >> may consider other acts of authentication (such as lower layer >security >> services). > >Less confusing, less neat. I would >s/consider (among other things)/among other things consider/ >s/may consider other acts/other acts/. >Or keep the original text, but with s/takes as input/may consider/. > >Though now that I see how the original text should be read, I'm not >sure >I want to argue it is confusing. I'm quite capable of confusing myself >without help from the draft. > >-- >Hallvard |