Re: protocol-27 comments #3

[Hallvard B Furuseth <h.b.furuseth@usit.uio.no>]

Jim Sermersheim writes:
>>>> Hallvard B Furuseth <h.b.furuseth@usit.uio.no> 11/8/04 5:59:28 AM
>>> Note that the AssertionValue in a substrings filter item conforms
>>
>>s/AssertionValue/AssertionValues/.
>
> I think you mean to s/AssertionValues/an AssertionValue/ in the
> previous sentence.

Better.

>>> delete: delete values listed from the modification attribute,
>>> removing the entire attribute if no values are listed, or if
>>> all current values of the attribute are listed for deletion;
>>
>> Suggest /if no values are listed, or if/if either values are listed
>> or/.
>
> how about:
>
> delete: delete values listed from the modification attribute. If no
> values are listed, or if all current values of the attribute are listed,
> the entire attribute is removed;

Better.

-- 
Hallvard