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Re: models-09 comments

Kurt D. Zeilenga writes:
>At 01:35 AM 1/6/2004, Hallvard B Furuseth wrote:
>>Kurt D. Zeilenga writes:
>>>At 08:45 AM 12/21/2003, Hallvard B Furuseth wrote:
>>>>draft-ietf-ldapbis-models-09.txt says:
>>>
>>>>> 4.2. Subschema Subentries
>>>>
>>>>What is 'subschema' as opposed to 'schema'?
>>> 
>>> Sub in subschema, like sub in subentry, refers to a subtree
>>> (or subtree refinement).  That is, a subschema is the schema
>>> that controls a particular subtree (or subtree refinement).
>>
>>OK.  Please mention that in the draft.
> 
> Then you'll ask me to define "subtree refinement".

Oh.  So I would.

> I'd like to avoid that.

Agreed.

>>>>> 3.4. Operational attributes
>
> How about:
> 
>  A DSA-shared operational attribute is used to represent information
>  of the DSA Information Model which is shared between servers (DSAs).  
>                   
>  A DSA-specific operational attribute is also used to represent
>  information of the DSA Information Model which is specific to each
>  server (DSA) (though, in some cases, may be derived from information
>  shared between servers) (e.g., 'namingContexts').

Fine.  Except, this time drop 'also'.

-- 
Hallvard